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Rainy Walk -text only- by ~corrine1357:iconcorrine1357:



Rainy Walk

Walking along,
while the rain falls,
and enjoying the loneliness,
someone you know,
walks up, behind you.

They are very quiet,
the rain covering any other noises,
respecting your loneliness,
but all the same,
wanting to talk with you.

You know they are there,
and them walking in the rain,
just to talk to you,
gives you a good feeling,
while waiting for them to start.

They are unsure,
of walking in the rain,
let alone talking to you,
and not making themselves a complete fool,
and being embarrassed in front of you.

You sigh as you begin,
to talk about the rain,
they look up at you,
and begin to smile,
for they feel the same as you do.

They join in,
laughing with you,
crying with you,
fighting with you,
and then you feel at home
©2008-2009 ~corrine1357
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And this is the start of my Walk Poems. I love this set of poems, there's seven total. This is the first one, I understand many (after reading Cloudy, the one before this) quesiton my order, it's just the way it works for me.

These most definitely are getting backrounds.. I just have to take them... and with me entering summer and 100 degree days, I think we'll be here a while.
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